FREE USE in Primitive World

Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Absolute Obedience

He looked at the woman. Her breathing was ragged, her skin flushed.

“You,” Sol said, his voice trembling slightly before he steadied it. “Lift your arms up.”

To his utter surprise, the woman didn’t argue. She didn’t ask who he was. She simply smiled… a vacuous, compliant smile…and lifted her arms high, exposing her smooth, pale armpits to the cool air.

Sol felt a rush of blood to his head that made him dizzy. It worked. She was listening.

He took a step closer, the darkness in his eyes growing. The inhibition that usually held a man back was crumbling under this newfound power.

“Show me,” he commanded, his voice dropping to a husky whisper. “Show me everything. Take it off.”

The woman nodded, as she playfully winked at him. Slowly and deliberately, her hands moved to the final fastenings of her skirt…a rough band of cured leather. With a simple tug, the knot came loose.

Gravity did the rest. The hide skirt slid down her hips and hit the dust with a soft whump.

Sol stopped breathing.

The soft afternoon light spilled across the courtyard, dancing across skin that was smooth and rich, the color of burnished copper. She wasn’t like the starving, withered women on the outskirts of the tribe. She was full-bodied, healthy, a prize of the tribe.

Her breasts were heavy and round, spilling out with a natural, unsupported weight, tipped with dark, large nipples that hardened visibly in the cool afternoon air. Her waist dipped inward before flaring out into wide, fertile hips and strong, muscular thighs… legs that were powerful, built for survival, yet maddeningly feminine. Between her legs, a dark, neat patch of hair drew his eyes like a magnet.

She stood there, completely exposed, her hands resting idly by her sides, her expression placid, waiting for his next command.

Sol felt a dryness in his throat that had nothing to do with thirst. His heart hammered against his ribs, threatening to crack them. He had seen women before in his previous life, on screens, in magazines… but this? This raw, unfiltered, primitive nudity standing inches away from him was something else entirely. The smell of her…a mix of wild herbs, sweat, and woman… filled his nose, clouding his judgment.

He took a step closer, the arousal in his veins now mixing with a terrifying sense of omnipotence.

“Real,” he muttered, his voice hoarse.

He reached out, his hand trembling slightly, and brushed his fingertips against the side of her breast. It was warm. Soft. incredibly elastic.

She didn’t flinch. She didn’t scream or slap his hand away. She just let out a soft, breathy sigh and leaned slightly into his touch, her silver eyes fixed on him with total submission. Like a trained pet.

The realization crashed down on Sol harder than the beast’s carcass. The hunter hadn’t left because he was scared. The woman wasn’t stripping because she liked him.

They were obeying.

“Holy shit,” Sol whispered, his hand gripping her soft flesh a little firmer, watching her reaction. “I can do anything.”

His fingers slowly moved down tracing the curve of her sensual hips, digging slightly into the plush flesh. She felt solid, warm, and incredibly alive under his touch. It wasn’t a dream. The rough texture of goosebumps rising on her skin from the cold air was real, the rapid pulse fluttering in her neck was real.

“Kneel,” Sol whispered, the word slipping out before he could even process it.

Without a second of hesitation, the woman’s knees hit the dirt. She sank down before him, her heavy breasts swaying slightly with the movement, her silver eyes looking up at him with that same eerie, blank adoration. She looked like a devotee before an altar, and he was the god she was praying to.

A dark, twisted grin spread across Sol’s face. The humiliation of the meat distribution, Vurok’s sneer, the cold arrogance of the Chief’s daughter…it all seemed to shrink in the face of this absolute control. Here, in this shadow, he wasn’t the cripple. He wasn’t the waste. He was the master.

He reached down, tangling his hand in her thick, dark hair, pulling her head back to expose the long line of her throat. He could take her. Right here. Right now. He could force this hunter’s woman to service him in the dirt, and she would probably thank him for it. The thought sent a jolt of lust straight to his groin, hard and demanding.

He leaned in, his face inches from hers, smelling the musk of her skin.

“Open your mouth,” he commanded.

She parted her lips instantly, her tongue resting wet and pink against her teeth.

Sol stared into that open mouth, his heart pounding like a war drum. He was on the edge, ready to unfold his fur clothes and lose himself in this newfound power.

But just as his hand moved to his waist cord, a sudden rustling came from the bushes nearby.

“Argh—”

He flinched, stumbling back a step, hand tightening around his loincloth. The world seemed to tilt for a fraction of a second, shadows shifting, black spots dancing in his vision. The sound cut through his lust‑fueled trance like a blade.

The cold afternoon air rushed back in, cooling his heated skin. He blinked, shaking his head, forcing the dizziness away, ears straining for another hint of movement.

As, he looked around quickly, paranoia suddenly replacing the arousal. They were in an alley between huts, but they weren’t invisible. The sounds of the feast were loud, but people were moving around. If someone… anyone… walked by and saw the village “cripple” standing over a naked woman, the spell might not matter. A spear through the back would kill him just the same.

He was physically weak. If the mind control broke, or if the hunter returned with friends, he was dead meat.

“Not here,” he muttered, breathing heavily, forcing his zipper hand down. “Too risky. Not yet.”

He looked down at the woman, who was still kneeling, still waiting with her mouth slightly open, oblivious to his internal crisis. The sight was pathetic and terrifying all at once.

He needed to get outta here.

“Get up,” Sol hissed, as he gulped looking at her exposed body.

She stood up immediately, the spell apparently unbroken by his moment of weakness.

Sol watched her, his mind racing. He had a weapon. A terrifying weapon. But he didn’t know its limits. How long did it last? Did it wear off? Would she remember this?

He couldn’t risk her running to her hunter husband crying about the boy who made her strip, but he also couldn’t let go of this chance.

No,” Sol whispered, the word lost in the heavy, musk-filled air between them. “I’m not stopping.”

He didn’t pull back. The darkness that had been festering in him… fed by Vurok’s scraps, by the Chief’s indifference, by the sheer brutality of this world… finally snapped the leash of his restraint.

He looked down at the woman, at her seducing, silver eyes that held no judgment, only absolute, terrifying obedience.

“Good girl,” he breathed, his hand moving from her hair to the back of her neck, guiding her inside the house.